@Padevil Thanks! Great suggestion in regards to risers and impacts, that is actually something that has eluded me completely so far, even though I have been looking for elements to break up my songs with 
Seen both ANNA and Whebba play live recently, mindbending to say the least - huge fan of that hard hitting, hypnotic and fluid style of techno. Great to hear I ticked a few of the boxes I was aiming for at least.
As to your last post, I probably couldn’t tell you what to improve on as it sounds way more polished than any of my turds ever sounded 
The lead is what enchanted my attention though, sounds like those percussive grill lids.