So I’ve listened to this a quite a few times. I dont like it.
Here are my critcal thoughts.
That snare probabilty thing.
Random noise is just that. Random noise. Is it musical?
If you’re after random noise, then yep, you’ve got that. If you’re after musical (as in, 'yeah man this is cool I want to listen to it again) then no, I dont think you got that. Why do I think that? Because there is no groove between the kick and snare.
Now just because I say I dont like it, theres no groove, that doesnt mean anything thats just my taste. But I reckon if the track had less random snare, ( and less random other bits) it would groove a bit more, and the noise would have a pattern, something for the brain to hook on to. And bingo- its musical. Even though its noise.
The kick is banging, all the synth death noise is banging. I feel like there’s a good track hidden in there trying to get out.
Anyway. Thats my feedback. You didnt ask for it. But I gave it anyway. Tell me to get fucked if you want.