Simon Allen - Beginnings (first OT driven track)

Hi. I have produced music for a number of years but always on a computer. In the last couple of years I have grown weary of using a computer to make music as I sit in front of one all day at work and therefore find it a very uninspiring situation. I decided to switch over to hardware and make my tunes like that, use the computer as a recording device only and then post them up for free. The first one is here:

https://soundcloud.com/simonmusicallen/begginnings

I used an octatrack and a tetra through a yamaha mixer. It sounds a bit tinny which I think might be the mixer but not sure! Thought I would just post it and learn in public. Have now picked up a secondhand machinedrum to help.

Would welcome any feedback.

Thanks

Simon