Octatrack + Digitone => DAW arranging and first draft

Hello everyone.

Here to ask feedback on this track I’ve exported to my DAW from an Octratrack session around 1 yr and a half ago.
Recently commiting a bit more to learn better the intricacies of a DAW and understanding that the arrangment and working on the stems after recording, really is polishing that unrefined diamond.
Let me know what you think.

Tone5 draft 1