My first steps in DAWless

Hello! I really need your opinions about my music! Advices appreciated to. I have been doing music (techno) not very long ago and I really want to develop in this direction. My workflow based on some elektrons gear and other synths (Octatrack mk2, Digitakt, A4 mk2, M:C). Now i trying to make music without computer and I want to understand how bad or good I’m doing my stuff
P.S sorry for horrible english