Regarding general video feedback - and this is just my preference, not hating - the jumpy, zoom, pause for a one liner, text writing on the screen… it makes it hard to follow what’s going on.
It doesn’t pull me in, it makes me look for something with more focus. My brain is already busy trying to follow what’s happening.
My personal preference is for simpler, more continuous style - as @Annihilation_Squares says - brevity is helpful.
I like the approach that The Unperson has. He picks a concept, outlines it, shows what he means and applies it to a musical context. He still makes comments or jokes, but he doesn’t stop the flow, he weaves it in. Son Wu does similar, and I find it very appealing.
What I do like in your video above, is the closely zoomed in screen views and the overall presentation is clear and bright. I wish The Unperson did more of that.
Finally, and again, I must stress that this is no hating, just a personal preference, but we don’t need to see you face when you talk.
We dont need to see EZBOT’s face, Red Means Recording’s face or BoBeats face. Say hi at the start for 30 secs by all means, but then just keep the camera on the synth and say your thing, point at something, whatever. The continual switching back and forth is something I find jarring on “gear videos”, and the more often it cuts to the face, the less likely I will watch a video through.
But this is me, I may not be typical, and I may not be your audience. Plus, I can’t do any of what you’re doing here, I certainly can’t do better myself. I just wanted to respond the original post requesting feedback and in no way meant any offence, so please don’t take any! 